Love of my life
Or used to be
I'm not a joke...but may be a fool
But you will find that I think free
I sat very still
While you whispered in my ear
I didn't even wince when you kissed me
As you drew me so near
I knew by the look within your eyes
That your love was not sincere
Your actions were very rude
When you held me near
So I have some news for you
Something you won't want to hear
When you were whispering to me
I had removed my hearing aid from my ear
A contest entry
- Prompt Semi-Quickie by JeannieD Hunter.
500 points, ended November 16, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is cute
One way of shutting a person of with them not being the weiser. Yes the joke is on them. Foo;s need not apply...mac
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Thanks mac, glad you enjoyed reading this poem. We have to add humor some time.
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HAHAHAHAHA did not expect the hearing device.i was becoming mushy,,great and good luck x
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Peter I don't wear a hearing device. So you can whisper softly in my ear. Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem.
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i will nibble your ear my love xxxx
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Promises, promises.
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LOL Thanks so much, I really need a laugh. The ending is too good. Thank you for entering and good luck!
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