New morn opens eyes
as the sun peeks through today's
ever hopeful skies...
Author notes
"Bring me HOPE." Image courtesty of contest host, Jin Carey, aka JinSays.
"here comes the sun, and I say it's alright. . ."
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A contest entry
- "here comes the sun, and I say it's alright. . ." by JinSays.
1222 points, ended November 15, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I love this haiku Cyn, very sweet, and hopeful.
Exactly what I wanted, thank you.
Love,
jin
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Thank you, Dearest Jin!!
I just centered the poem, so it looks a little better. For being such a short piece, it looks fairly cool... I hope your day is going well and the sun is shining on you!! 
Peace, love & hugs always, xx Cyn xx
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that is the kind of hope that i love to see the start of a new day where you can greet the sun, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Hopeful write, I loved it. thanks for sharing and that's one good haiku.
~Noor
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i liked this
the personificiation of it
just lovely
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Thank you for your thoughtful comments...
Thank you for stopping by, and for the kudos!! I hope Jin will like this Haiku... Take care, and thanks again. Your visit made my day!! Peace & hugs, xx Cyn xx 
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