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Do You Hear What I Hear?

Do You Hear What I Hear,christmas music loud and clear.
let's all join in and do the Two Step Round The Christmas Tree.
AllanJackson singing if we don't get any snow for christmas Santa Will have to come in a Pick Up Truck.Alvin the chipmunk seems to think Santa can come in a 747 it's big enough to bring him lots of stuff.
Little Johnny's trying to tell Mary something.Mary Did You Know? I Heard Santa On The Radio. Mary says I saw Santa in a parade.When's he going to have time to make toys if he's talking on the radio and riding around in a parade. Well Sally says i saw Santa in the shopping mall.
santa needs  to be at the North Pole checking his list twice,yeah make sure i'm on the nice list.You on the nice list that's funny.

I heard my sister crying and heard her mumble.Last Year I Gave You My heart,This Year To Save Me From Tears I'll Give it to Someone Special.
I guess she was upset with some guy.

Do You hear What I Hear? A Child,A Child Crying In The Night.He's probaly upset Santa won't find him or bring him anything.
But there's Angel's Among Us.helping with those in need.We have Chritmas Daddies and the Empty Stocking Fund.Money donated to each group so christmas presents can be bought and give to the needy.There's mittens,hats and scarfs made to keep big and little people warm.
It's a traditon that's been going on for years.

Do You Hear What I Hear? There's A New Kid In Town. He's laying in a Manger.He's Mary's Boy Child,this the Birth Of The King.The Finest Gift of All. his birth will make it A Christmas To Remember.

Do You Hear What I hear? There's Christmas for every boy and girl.
Could you try Remembering to put a little Holiday in your Heart.
Do You Hear What I Hear? I hear Christmas music loud and clear and famlies full of Christmas cheer.

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just some silly chatter about christmas.their are song Titles in the poem.

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  • debilynn gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    adorable write! i love how you put this together. you are very talented. keep writing! God bless you always

  • celadia
    November 20, 2008

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    it's a strong point you make that the greatest gift humankind ever received was Jesus, a poor boy who probably couldn't afford presents and may never have got any, so why shouldn't we give to funds that make a gift to some young child who will grow up and see his/her society according to how it treated him/her, and if it's positive that child will give society his/her gift. I don't know if that's quite what you meant but that's what I got out of it.


  • Sandygram
    November 19, 2008

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    Ho Ho Ho!!!

    What a treat to read all the Christmas song titles. They bring back so many pleasant memories. This was a delight to read this cold frosty morning. Thank you for sharing. Take care.

    Bless You,
    Sandy


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    very clever...

    Yes...I did recognise the song titles in this feel good write A very positive Christmas message you've sent here and penned beautifully. I can't believe that Christmas is nearly upon us again Loved it


  • urapns66
    November 19, 2008

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    I love Christmas time =D poems about it are pretty cool too
    i really liked
    "Do You Hear What I Hear? There's A New Kid In Town. He's laying in a Manger.He's Mary's Boy Child,this the Birth Of The King.The Finest Gift of All. his birth will make it A Christmas To Remember."
    thats awesome great job and keep up the good work!


  • Raining Kisses silver member
    November 16, 2008

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    This is wonderfully clever, the way you tie song titles together into this poignant piece, is utterly brilliant, this is a real masterpiece, if it were a painting it would hang pride of place above my fire place
    magnificent


  • condor gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    Super write. I love that song, Do you hear what i hear. Your posers really do make one think. The setout of this piece is excellent and the story was well written here. Xmas to me seems lost in commercial greed and people just want want want. Pity they couldn't step back and see what you have pointed out. You did a wonderful job.

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