Go away and go away
go lie away to lie away
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Author notes
Treedo trado trido tree, trano trado trid A train E in tree, troday O tried, troday O treed, tran true trarrier trid, tra trinetreetrevintree treed.
A contest entry
- Make me Roll with Laughter PLEASE by Lady-Pegasus.
1200 points, ended December 4, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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ok, then
well certainly different to be certain! Please review the rules and edit to meet compliance therein! Other than that, well, I can see where you were trying to go, I think, but it just seems too nonsensical even to be humorous, just MHO! It was an interesting write and perhaps if there was a little bit more recognizable within the nonsense.... just a thought? I will be reviewing all submission before final call so feel fre to edit as requested or desired.
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