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The Irishman

An Englishman, an Irishman, a Scottishman,
All walk into a bar,
Tedious inevitability strikes,
The teller has gone too far.
Yes he does stupid things,
Yes he's a strange folk,
But more to the point, he's a simple fool,
Made into a walking joke.

A contest entry

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  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    Very unique take on the prompt! Well done.
    This one makes the reader think. Good job.
    Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.


  • Hikari Lady
    November 13, 2008
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    lol, nice and funny write. Best of luck in the contest.

    ~Noor