Five days in
And it feels like I've failed
Your body wails
"Don't let me go."
And the tears slide down
Am I strong enough?
Just how tough
Must I be for her
So much is changing
Yet we stand so still
Just until
Our tears meet once again
Don't hurt anymore
Your angelic sorrow
Is all I can borrow
Through the words lost in your hands
If you think I am gone
Please think with your heart
Comments
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this piece i think out of the 6 is my favorite it has a consistent strength and a good tone and the 2nd to last stanz is beautiful
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Amazing write, you told a sad thing with slow and calm words and theme. Your feelings just reached out and spoke in the lines.
~Noor
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i know it sounds slightly odd but this actually made me smile.. amazing... its perfect..
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