I am your canvas
design me as you wish.
A shapeless lump of clay,
molding me with your kiss.
Your love enveloping me
entirely within your being.
My desire is to please you,
a mirage is what you are seeing.
Ember touches completely sear through me
smoke and mirrors, an illusion cast by your hand,
strong and tempered you are my flower, I your bee
distinctively guiding me, for you are my man.
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Ok , I had a hard time with this - because I mold my own being, not someone else
"A woman can be anything the man who loves her would have her be."
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Very, very nice! I loved your take on the prompt. Well done. Keep it flowing
Much love
Ylova
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Beautiful~ and message taken...for to the ones we love we can be what ever makes them happy...self is self giving and to be loved for ones self, for within its self a gift...excellent read
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wonderfully done, i like how you used the prompt in this poem, i was looking forward to what you would do, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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wow...wonderfully done...I'm impressed.....I love your first stanza...excellent usage of imagery!! Really well done...good luck in the contest
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I love you so much sissy and I miss u!! Big hugs and kisses!!
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your prompt will be
"A woman can be anything the man who loves her would have her be."
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