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A Quill's Weight

 

When Poets wake from lurid absinthe dreams
The risk of their vocation shows its face;
An endless freight of drink cannot replace
A train of wild thought with calmer streams.
And though the Poet's symbols know extremes
The life they give her cannot find disgrace;
And though inclined to chew the Queen Anne's Lace
The brood that comes with mytho- squirms and teems.


I've painted pictures of the witch's grove
And sang the psalms of fools upon the trail;
The images that come are blinding still.
Upon my final leg I leave this cove
And drift into my sea to find a vale...

To scrawl "adieu" and drown my heavy quill.

 

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  • Night Hope gold member
    November 16

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    Long have I been amazed by those writers who seemed able to consume their magical elixirs and then compose such incredible pieces, in spite of being intoxicated. I never could, nor would I ever attempt to do so. The weight of the quill is quite heavy enough without adding the weight of a massive headache to it.


  • Vera Rich gold member
    November 23, 2008

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    Thank you for entering this in my "Celebrating poetry and poets" competition. It is on my short list, and I shall return to it when I come to make my final assessment.


  • BlancetNoir gold member
    November 20, 2008

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    Love this

    Timeless, beautiful imagery, dark but not too dark.Just right. "Chew the Queen Anne's Lace" is extra special.


  • Grunts Girl gold member
    November 13, 2008
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    for some reason... i go to a fishermans poet
    or a pirates poet....
    i felt the age of regret in the first section and if a fisherman- to me - regret of distance created
    if a pirate- to me - the crimes guilty of
    but over all i loved the age to it... the weird sense of growth but without taking away ones self...
    'a train of savagery with calmer streams'

    and the second part leaves me in my own metaphor lingering from my thoughts above

    loved this


    • Victory Gin silver member
      November 13, 2008

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      I am both a pirate and a fisherman but the voice in this poem was necessarily the fisherman. Poetry is a burden in some regards and has madness attached to it... nonetheless a poet can do nothing 'cept scrawl and attempt to transform fleeting experiences into a lasting image of beauty. I'm less tortured by existential anxiety these days but still feel the burden of being creative in some way. I suppose it has become bearable now that I have learned not attach so much self-importance to it -- a tiger by the tail instead of a bag of bricks -- but the free spirit dysfunction still persists. Thank you for the comment.


      • Grunts Girl gold member
        November 13, 2008

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        sometimes i hesitate before i speak...
        sometimes i fear posting where i went for insulting the poet to me would be awful...

        and here is where you remind me... to trust my gut instinct and what was said to me without telling me.
        i loved that i could be spot on with the picture of the man
        i loved that you went into personal detail with me about him
        thank you for restoring confidence in me that sometimes
        creeps up behind my ear while i sit and read


  • just mercedes gold member
    November 13, 2008
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  • Amera gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    What a wonderful perfectly penned sonnet. So? You think poets are fond of the wormwood of the Green Fairy do you? You may be right. I love this poem, wish I had written it.

    Love,
    Amera♥

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