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Rhythm

Turn
Eyes lock
Stand
Reach
Stretch . . .
Touch



Chains snap us back
And we hit the wall hard
We brush it off and look away
We didn't expect to get far

Bound to opposite walls
But we're still in the same room
We can hear each other breathing
The chains will be gone soon

Backs to each other
We sit and get to work
Focus on our studies
Cover up the hurt


. . . Pause . . .

 


Turn
Eyes lock
Stand
Reach
Stretch . . .
Touch

Author notes

Cicada

Option #3
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Did the rhyming part seem forced?

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  • Rain Soaked Rose
    November 16, 2008
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    I sorry but, I didn't get it and it didn't make me feel better...sorry...


    • Kikai Ni
      November 17, 2008
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      No, I should apologize for entering when my poem didn't fit the subject matter.

      • Rain Soaked Rose
        November 17, 2008
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        You can change the poem if you don't it will get DQ sorry!


        • Kikai Ni
          November 19, 2008
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          A DQ would probably be best. Once again, I sincerely apologize. If you wish, however, by way of a formal apology, if you would send me a pic or quote or title to build a poem around and enter, I will to make up for disrespecting you. It would be my pleasure. Of course, if you'd rather not, I completely understand.

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