Beyond the vows you made to her,
I am the name that escapes your lips,
Tenacious this story has become,
Tackling your feelings are far gone,
Explanations that can not be told,
Round the corner, their ears are glued to the floor.
Searching the soul is what I need,
Waiting for this story to unfold,
Exploring other options within this realm,
Extemporaneous are our hugs,
Touch me in the morning my love.
Lies and secrets untold,
Overture in B is what I hear,
Venomous souls are here to attack,
Exhausted because there is more to come.
Yvonne J. Griffin
11/13/08
Comments
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I feel a lot of emotion in this piece which is typical of what I've read from other pieces of your works. Lots of interesting expressions here.
"Extemporaneous are our hugs,
Touch me in the morning my love.
Lies and secrets untold,
Overture in B is what I hear,
Exhausted because there is more to come." -Yikes!
Not sure I'm grasping the big picture though. Seems as though you've tried to put a lot into one small package. I need a hint I think
~Mary O
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