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Mr. John Lennon

When Hope is lost,
I'm all alone,
You are there to comfort me.
Screaming words of solace,
Let me see, Let me see.

When I need someone,
To light my way,
You never fail,
To have the key-
Singing songs of shelter,
Let me see, Let me see.

When I've given up,
My world is dark,
You are there,
On bended knee-
Saving me from myself,
Let me see, Let me see.

You are the torch,
That clears my mind-
You are the better half of me.
And when my world is foggy,
Let me see, Let me see.

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  • poet2angels gold member
    November 25, 2008
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    Unique and well written piece!
    TY for entering

    Lynda


  • Three Doves
    November 13, 2008

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    An interesting well written take on the prompt.
    Best wishes in life and the contest.
    Peace in light and love
    Noah