Why does guilt overshadow my dreams?
Why failure of my past screams?
Why am i left alone in crowd?
Why lie seems the truth when loud?
Why my soul don't get love rains?
Why even time can't heal my pains?
Why my life seems no more mine?
Why hope's ray refuse to shine?
Why journey ends up in night?
Why destiny still out of sight?
Why my world is driven by dark?
Why my being a question-mark?
Have heard death answers
The questions of past
That's why i am tempted
To breathe my last!
Author notes
Well...
Still don't know what made me write this!
Swati
A contest entry
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Very good nomrally poems like this do not work but
you kep very original
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Nice Philosophy and great lyric. Wonderful presentation and enchanting imagination. Keep writing such wonders. I would be happy, if you could stamp your views on my poems too.
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Thankyou for your encouraging comment.
And I would love to reas some stuff from you!
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Your view was taken swift upon the idea, breaking forth in all lifes mystery. It was beautifully written and done, capturing the emotion of forever wondering and questioning of it all. Thank you for your entry!
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Glad you liked it.
Thankyou for the applause.
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You certainly have asked a lot of questions that are so important for your happiness. This is very sad.
Well Done...Best wishes in the contest
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Thankyou for your valuable comment.
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