whisper all your frail thoughts
burden them unto my soul
don't give in to negative seeds
let the darkness be
take my hand and follow
as we chase that light called hope
never let it stray from sight
like a flower tracking the sun
we'll face the winds
of temptation and change
we'll stand in stoic defiance
to the rains of infinite doubt
together we'll be one
challenging life to sever the bond
and if we shine until tommorow
fate will leave us be
Author notes
Prompt: "Let It Be" by The Beatles.
In a list
A contest entry
- Let It Be... by poet2angels.
700 points, ended November 25, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Detailed critique welcome
Comments
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Wonderful lyrical words to mimic the song. Beautifully stated. Congratulations on your award. Wonderful poetry in this piece. ~Pamela
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Fate will never leave our side...never turn away from the light, nor give in to the dark. What a wonderful friendship that would be. Or a love that is never apart, but together for all eternity. ~Sie
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Excellent Write! Well chosen words perfect with your title! I know it may sound as if I'm surprised but the truth is, not in the least, Poet.
Peace in light and love
Noah
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What a perfect poem with a perfect title...I love this. It brought me a smile today ...
Thank you for entering and for the smile and sigh~
Lynda
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