Whispered secret's drip from carefully laid concrete layers;
history stored within old architecture, crafted with sweat & tears,
brought to life by bodies of laughter & sadness.
Ivy creeps curiously, clinging to tales shared,
by echoes that traipse through out the halls,
falling upon willing ears.
A grand masterpiece cemented in time,
standing strong, as if saluting, screaming creativity,
from its very core.
Mysteriously shrouded by ancient friends,
their leaves waving a greeting as gentle breezes, pass by.
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Prompt: Do_You_Seek_the_Castle__by_RedAnalysis
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Wow. I love it. You are really good at creating strong and beautiful imagery, you know that? I am loving your work
I am so glad I decided to stop by. Keep it flowing
Much love
Ylova
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This was really lovely, I enjoyed the thought process here. thank you very much for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.
Angel
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Very nicely done! Your words hold a quite calm to them in places, giving the write a tranquil air to it. Deeply penned, good luck in the contest
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sis this is so beautiful I love it!! Aww you did such a very lovely job with this write!!!! This is so incredible!! You have such a talent!! I love it!!
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A complicated poem, great use of imagery, calmly and vividly...you give life and a story to the pic. "screaming creativity"...wow...your whole poem blended into personifications..great job. Not sure of a few words need replacement...although other words usage works very well. Good luck in the contest
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