Why
do I
never sigh
and never cry
You are mine, that's why
Sweet portrait for my eye
with love that can never die
With romance that will never dry
To the highest heights we'll soar, we'll fly
Truly I'm the world's most fortunate guy
In a list
A contest entry
- Best of questions... by Scyphon.
1000 points, ended November 14, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Why by charmander13.
700 points, ended December 24, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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What a cherished and labored for relationship! I have heard "If you find a man on a mountain peak, he probably didn't fall there!" We often value most that for which we paid most dearly. May you ever be blessed in your great love.
Lovely etheree and monorhyme.
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Nice. Short and sweet! I like it.
Thank you so much for your entry and all the best to you!
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Such beauty of answers to your own question, truth and power because of your love. Lifting you to the heavens of happiness and keeping a smile forever in your soul. Thank you for entering!
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Cute and wonderfull.
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Cute and wonderfull.
Good luck in the contest!
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this is very good, it shows that your love is strong
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Very sweet and romantic, the love shines through.
Wonderful...Best of luck in the contest
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Wowzz!!! This just made me 'wow' at it. Sweet and wonderful also very beautiful shaped and formated.
best of luck in the contest. Well penned!
~Noor
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"Sweet portrait for my eye"--that's a nice line. That takes a lot of talent to rhyme a poem like this at the end of every line. Good luck in the contest.
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I think that this is interesting and yes I think you are fortunate to have a life and love that will never die good luck in the contest be well
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