If you were mine my darling
I would love you oh so true
If you were mine my darling
Each day would be so new
When I hold you in my arms
And caress you tenderly
I'll kiss you on the top of your head
And kiss your face and lips so free
I'll plant a kiss on every inch
Of your wonderful beautiful face
Your lips will get several hits
For they are in just the right place
I'll cuddle and caress you
And touch you everywhere
For you see my darling
I do love you and care
If you were truly mine
I'd even love you more
But I can only put so much
Into a written poem that says you I adore
A contest entry
- Olde Fashioned Love by Titus.
1400 points, ended December 30, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
1 - 8 of 8
-
This poem is an obvious gaze at one another, the richness between two is very much an obvious devotion. I can almost feel it even. Lovely words, and it is going to be very difficult judging. well done.,
-
golly katie..you are the romantic soul,,bless, a cold bucket of water would calm you down,,,lol x
-
this is honey sweet and I adore romantic poetry...you have done an excellent job with this one dear.....God bless...
novy
-
-
Thank you novy. I think we both are just a couple of romantics.
-
-
Yummy!
What a lucky man that would be. You wrote with a sensual tone and absolute honesty. Very sweet poem, sweet Katie.
-
-
Thank you WolfHeart for your kind comments. Glad you enjoyed my poem.
-
-
So Lovely
Oh Katie, I love the sweet romance of your words. I could write these about the love in my heart for they maks me long to be with him. This was a delight to read. Flow and rhyme are wonderful. You take care.
Sandy
Bles You,
Sandy
-
-
Thank you Sandy. Glad you have a love in your life. Your comments are greatly appreciated.
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 8 of 8
