Unbridled passion on boughs,
soaking in all love allows.
Taken to new lover's height,
inhibitions all take flight.
As you quell trembling lips,
excite me with fingertips.
Enjoying nature at its best,
you say, come, upon me rest.
Release within nature's flow,
feel your love inside me grow.
Pleasure as I gently guide,
deeper, deeper, deep inside.
Moment of bliss unexpected,
sensation, warm love ejected.
Wouldn't want it any other way,
a perfect ending to this day.
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt..... Sensual by Angelflower.
700 points, ended December 4, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This had such a passion that touched gently on the readers heart. I truly loved reading this. Thank you very much for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.
Angel
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"pleasure as i gently guide
deeper deeper deep inside" - it gives nice feelings
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Thank you for the lovely comment. Take care, Sandy
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This is pretty, sweet and sensual.
Beautiful rhyme and flow.
Not much on words today but I wanted to let you know I liked this
good luck in the contest
Rhonda
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Good Morning Rhonda
Thank you for stopping by and reading. I do appreciate your comment. Hope you have a good day. Hugs and Smiles, Sandy
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beautifully written and sensual ...a great flow and a subtle rhyme that doesn't seem forced...lovely ~
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Lovely Comment
Thank you so much for dropping by and reading. Take care, Sandy
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How beautifully romantic and sensual...lovely flow and word choice...lovly metaphor for such wonderful moments together...very elegant and tasteful...
best to you!
mystic
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Good Morning
Thank you for this wonderful comment. I appreciate you stopping by and reading. You take care. Sandy
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Moment of bliss...in natures unbridled love! What an interesting take on the prompt and picture. Good luck in your conest. ~Sie
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Good Morning Sie
So nice to have you stop by. Hugs and Smiles. You take care, Sandy
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Great take on the prompt, you have captured the true essence of the contest, passionate yet tastefull, this is really a great poem, blessings with love John
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Good Morning John
Thank you for the wonderful comment. You are always encouraging. Thank you for stopping by and reading. Hugs and Smiles.
Blessings Sandy
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Wow, Miss Sandy!
Wonderful flow and gracfull dance of pure love and passion prance!! Hmmm didnt know you had that in you!
great poem Sandy, written with class !!
Blessings
Rend
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Good Morning Rend
Thank you for this lovely coment. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Take care, Sandy
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Wow!
So sensual... very very good. You did a wonderful job. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank You for the nice comment. I appreciate you stopping by. Take care, Sandy
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