My dearest (insert name),
I write to you to explain
That I have fell in love again.
Her smile so sweet and eyes just right,
I talk to her almost every night.
Shes so perfect I wish she was mine,
to have and to hold for all time.
If only she lived closer or if only you knew,
that the girl I write about,
is the same one I write this to.
In my heart there is no doubt,
that you are the girl I love,
the one I can't live with out
and it's you who is all the above.
I love you with all that is me,
I would do anything to make you happy.
We will leave behind all that forgets
then we could live our lives with no regrets.
Your amazing, I love you more each day,
forever and always in my heart you will stay.
Nothing compares to you not even the stars,
I promise to take away your hearts deep scars.
Your the girl of my dreams and my best friend.
I will be with you till the very end.
I love you (insert name),
Danny
Author notes
I write this for the contest, please be honest in what you think
A contest entry
- New Contest Enter.... by darkchemgirl.
475 points, ended November 13, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I think that this is fabilous.... amazing. How you spoke at the begining and suddenly said that the one you sent that letter to is the girl you been talking about. sweet love letter! No wonder it won Bronze.
Best of wishes sent your way.
~Noor
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I thought this was great, if there was a a lot more guys like you. Guys wouldn't have such a bad reputation. You very thorough and it was a very great poem. Good Luck.
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Awwwww!
oh this is so sweet!
Rebecca is a very lucky girl to have such a beautiful poem written for her.
I'm not normally a fan of rhyme, but this is perfect. It doesn't appear at all forced and helps with the flow. You also have some beautiful imagery throughout.
best of luck in the contest you have entered. and thank you for the excellet read.
ElectricBloom
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