suspected wind
glues intial white out…
miscarriage confirmed
little fellow in leaves
my replacement of finger
note for strong antennae ~
crinkle autumn foliage
glistening cold:
crawl follow on skin I sing,
hook half climb.
egg pod to dandelion flower
full
A contest entry
- first frost by AJ Morelli.
2700 points, ended December 7, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please leave off good luck, unnatural emoticons, applause symbols...hypes
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ummmm....ok
egg pod to dandelion flower
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AJ Morelli I didn't mean for it not to me much
I'm sorry this couldn't even inspire your actual (casual) signature... like I miscarried that response too
It gels with my limitation, but too I shouldn't have mushroomed such without drying that into dormant wonder
thanks for commenting, I appreciate you recycling my favorite line ~
called Carolyn
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your poems are always with depth, i find myself re reading never drawing the same conclusion...perhaps this is a good thing for me...deep thinking...
you can imagine the clappies just the same
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Mal you made me smile
off guard your going over this again to intriguing change reminds me of washing a snagged fingernail that happened cutaneously which then softened back in place so it needn't be finished and neither is ouch on like margin isn't there
my poetry is property welcoming your visit of comment and lingering effect of visualizing actual hands that clap as sincere typing,
called Carolyn
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"crinkle autumn foliage" oooooo ...i love that line. great imagery and well written piece...
good luck
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CathrynAnn I do enjoy your coming round
I had the same feeling with that verse, like I got second wind for my expression to get towards some turning completion
thanks for context of compliment, and the rose imaging that isn't recalculated into cliche asI tend to think of the yellowy wobbly smiles I try to avoid before folks go to comment box lol
I'm a dancer this morning ~ may take a break or combine energy for return favor with way waves,
called Carolyn
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this is good word play here. i can realy see the art in your writing as i read this. well done. much love and respect
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afroqban I'm honored it wasn't jarring but for joining
my expression was past a traipse, thanks for finding enactment can be taken more. a compliment around profile.
your kindness makes easy segue to return favor, yet such introduction is effecicient without applause symbols for me as asked to all commenters,
called Carolyn
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Viewing into the minds of others is always a pleasure, even more when it’s a scribe I enjoy. No need to return any favors, I leave comments to those I enjoy reading…if I didn’t like it, you would never know I was there. Lol.
Much love and respect to you
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