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The Peacock!

I observed a peacock,
What a magnificent creation,
It is a painting of it self,
Beautiful plumes that stretch out,
Colors of blue and green that are bold,
A strut that mimics the regal walk of royalty.

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  • Iyaden
    November 13, 2008

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    I found that a very good piece but I have a question if I may. Did you intent to say royalty or loyalty? I find both fit your poem very well to a very different effect