concentrate on breath
time is slowing around me
energy enfolds
I feel the power
my Reiki Masters hands, float
lifting me higher
I am still there ,
white draped table far below
yet I am not there
Cassiopeia
energy flows around me
pulls me in free flight
colors surpassing
violet turns to crimson hues
any experience
wing like pressure pulls
atmosphere so thin up there
leaves me gasping air
time now returns me
still bathed in the after glow
rested and recharged
Author notes
2 trance state , astral projection
A contest entry
- 'Journeys of the Mind' by Dark Otter.
400 points, ended November 25, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Are you
a Reikki master? I enjoyed the thought and the write.
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reiki master
only a level two, big into long distance healing
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Wow! I could almost feel myself lift with you. Your description is so vivid. Lovely color words, concise stanzas, great ending lines. I really enjoyed this.
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yeah..
very vivid imagery makes this piece 'pop' with a realism that feels like an out of body experience.
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yeah
flying high my friend -
oh yes
the trance state, a trip to the moon
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