There is not a dwelling that a life hasn't be-felled,
often they were made of stone and mud and some lived through hell.
Within the realm rings are so formed ,
rings of life often torn.
All dwellings have the bones within ,
spirits of a time from beginning to end ,
Often those old dwellings stands today,
listen closely for they all have history spirits held at bay.
Yes walls within dwellings if your silent you shall hear,
laughter and so often heart felt tears.
Where love and hate plays within you see ,
for the uncaring ways of humanity .
Can you hear their breathing and often a sigh,
its the ways of the spirits that remained behind.
Lost to the world from those so filled with hate ,
you can even hear them as you enter the gate .
Sometimes they take up in the furnishings within,
and as you look upon them you see not their ora of sin.
Sold to the market the furnishing leave this place ,
and reside within our own homes this day .
The old castles of years past ,
now their demons across the world has been cast .
Bringing this to the new dwellers unknowing of its presence there,
cast upon this world its hate to those unaware .
Author notes
Hold true to your faith for one not be open to the spirits at hand .Be not left behind to hold destructions a part of the devils band .Look wityhin and know fill your life with love and you shall see there will be no room for the evil spirites that follow me .They wait and watch forever and a day for they hope you will become weak along the way . Reach forever for faith and stay just ahead of those left behind when you boaught that old antique bed .
Pic by Do-You-Seek-the-Castle_by-RedAnalysis
A contest entry
- What do you See.... Picture Prompt by Angelflower.
700 points, ended December 3, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is really wonderful. I truly love how you bring out such wonders with this prompt. thank you very much for sharing. best of luck in the contest.
Angel
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I love how you wrote this piece mom!! You truly did a very wonderful and truly brilliant job!! This is amazing!! I love it!!
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Nice job on this one. I enjoyed it alot. It is a very deep and thoughtful entry. Best of luck in the contest.
Mike
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Very nice, I really like this piece, very insightful, deep, full of things to make us ponder. There is more to life than meets the eye and energy does not end with mortal death. Very well penned.
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This is an eerie write isn't it I enjoyed it very much though, I have been in places that made my spine tingle and i wondered whos footsteps i was in. The message to hang on to your faith is important here, I used to live in a place that seemed full of evil, my old vicar felt sure there was evil at play, interestingly enough, the only two families I know who escaped that place with their children untouched by the evil were mine and my nieces family, we are both practicing christians whos homes were full of prayer
thanks for sharing this great write
theresa
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