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Uncontrolable

The beast inside me,

tearing at its chains.

ripping free.

 

Fighting its holds,

the bonds of sanity

attacking my humanity.

 

Taking control of me,

lashing out in disagree

at every little thing.

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  • Yemassee gold member
    August 16

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    It sounds like you are having some emotional issues. Or at least the poem's speaker is. I guess most of us have the moment where we unleash the beast...sometimes people push us just too far.