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One Glimpse

The glint on the water
Shining in the moonlight
I turn, glancing away...
It disapears for eternity

The light reflecting off of the clouds
A silver lining through the darkness
I look away for an instant...
Gone it forever will be

The simplicity of a single glance
Can forever impact the soul
A simple look or lack there of
Can heal or break a heart


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  • It is in this simple and short glimpses that we see the true beauty of life.

    Well penned and well expressed too.

    Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem.


  • FyreFox
    January 28
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    "Why do all good things come to an end?"

    Its not fair is it?


  • Hikari Lady
    November 13, 2008

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    Sweet and true. In life we always tend to miss so mnay beautiful things just because we didn't take enough time to look deep within and see what's around us.
    Thanks for sharing.

    ~Noor


    • LaVieBohemme
      November 14, 2008
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      thanks... ya, theres the things that you wish couldve lasted longer, and then theres the things that lasted too long... wish we could swap them!


  • Sweet-Sins
    November 13, 2008
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    great!!!

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