Rime
on foliage
for first time
In a list
A contest entry
- first frost by AJ Morelli.
2700 points, ended December 7, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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nice...
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the man with a hay na ku for everything...well done
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great write...perfect piece you have created ~
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i had to understand what this form was, and once i did, i was able to really see the art in this. well done and much love.
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i always appreciate your asian forms
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quickly stroked...
I liked the phonetic doubleplay this lends that you lead us with, so it can sound like you're saying spring's noticed for inspiration opening but read with another seasonal sealing. It can engender a degree of appreciation for both or a riminder. One can be moved to communicate on both and not make fun but further...
shortness satisfies ~
called Carolyn
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