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Hypnotise

Hypnotise
The beat it keeps
'tween your eyes
The misses seek

All of your dreams are now true

Stigmatise
Till people weep
Lonely eyes
Inside your sleep

Could have sworn you'd seen this through

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This is an idea I had on the computer and wanted to note it down, I don't think it'd quite complete yet!

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