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Never Cease

Was it that i excited you from a distance,
caught your eye from afar,
Lit up the darkness in your mind like stars?
Was it the way i swung my hips?
Or licked my lips?
That caused your heart to split
cause your heart to fill with lust
or was it just bad luck
was it just, wrong time wrong place
that you saw my face
and decided what had to take place
what had to happen
for you to feel complete
because you wanted me
you defiled your mind with thoughts about me
made up lies in your mind
that we could be together
that we should be together
but never once did you think about the consequences
never once did you think of the effect
the toll such a violation
would have on my self respect
on my conscience mind

OH YES...but you were kind.

Whiped away my tears,telling me not to fear,

telling me, "Everything is going to be alright
Just as long as you do not fight"

to "Hush Hush babygurl

I am about to make your world

just open your golden gate to me

and i will show you i am not as evil as i appear to be

Give me your treasures

and I'll do right by you forever"

will humanities imperfections NEVER CEASE!

or will there be many more who end up just like me:

SCARED, ALONE, and NEVER AGAIN like you use to be.

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  • Manoj Sanyal
    November 29, 2008

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    Narrative poem and anguish with scare, loneliness and all....
    Well penned..
    Best wishes and good luck,

  • Ronius
    November 13, 2008

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    Really good.

    I liked this, especially the verse the guy goes into. It gave me the feeling of a dark, painful, disgusting fairytale where the characters speak in verse like the narrator. Well done.