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green haiku

when life leaves, autumn
and love springs breathless wonders
Nature showers green
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purush

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    November 17, 2008
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    Thank you fo your Haiku:

    when life leaves, autumn
    and love springs breathless wonders
    Nature showers green

    A sweet write, associating love with greenery like that of the spring time and autumn with the end of life.

    Thanks again.

    Harrisham Minhas



  • Harrisham Minhas
    November 13, 2008

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