Hot Bot

Like a boat, you
rock me
in waves bursting
white foam
slips on body.

For the waves of lust
lose in your sea to drown
on this moon tides
in warmth of...ouch,
your moans
causing a huge hot bot.

The magic
transports me
in swings of your caresses
to burn low
my thrusting comet
drowned in middle of a shipwreck
crossing with my alluring kisses
entangled to cover
until arriving at the mast.

The shock of prow
would explode
the whole ocean
penetration by my mouth.

Author notes

~spiritualangel~

Prompt: Picture

A contest entry

Pop my Quickie Cherry by Disturbed Prodigy. 700 points, ended November 17, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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KayJay
November 13, 2008

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Nicely done... sensual words caress my mind and beautiful images float just behind my eyes... A wonderful write... Best of luck.
Ken
Disturbed Prodigy
November 13, 2008

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i like it, you know this is going to be hard to judge, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
Disturbed Prodigy
November 13, 2008
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your prompt is