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a love story

within these walls of a castle
a baby girl entered this world
and her bloodline being royal
her fate was sealed in stone

as she grew from just an infant
to a toddler then a teen
she was given just a short leash
to explore the world outside

the apple of her fathers eye
and the image of her mum
all that came upon her
was bewitch under her spell

they say that she had beauty
more vast then all the lands
a voices just like an angels
and a heart of gold

the years they past on quickly
they almost flew on by
and the girl changed to a woman
one loved by all that her peers

promised to a prince at birth
one she never knew
when the day of her 18th year
he came to meet his bride

she was ever nerves
and he was kind of shy
but one look was all it took

for their happy ever after 

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  • Mrs D
    November 26, 2008
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    reallyyyy lovely

    great imagination..........you really peered within the walls of the castle for a great write


  • Devilish Temptation
    November 14, 2008
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    Aww beautiful, a nice ending xxxxxxx enjoyed it very much your work is TALENT