Wrap your self around me
Engulf me in your arms
And feel the pulse of my desire
Oh, touch me now, my love
Kiss the breath of passion’s fire
Soft against my skin
Acquit me from this torment
That burns so deep within
Take the flower from this garden
The orchid of my youth
And release the cry of doves
Beneath thy crescent moon
Light this night on fire
From whence this flame began
In the heat of mortal passion
Between this woman
And this man
A contest entry
- Erotic Innuendos. by Poetryintheblood.
900 points, ended September 20, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - WOMEN VS MEN POETS! ENTER NOW by the charmed one.
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Comments
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Nice...
I like the metaphors here...
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tombruize
Thank you so much for the return favor, I so grately appreciate your taking the time.
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wow
Wow. You create incredible imagery there! You have a great style of writing! Nice write!
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CelilidhaChaos
Thank you very much for stopping by to read and comment. It is so appreciated.
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This is so passionate. I love it. You truly create a picture in the mind as you touch the heart with these words. Excellent job.
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Thank you, it was a picture prompt write. Two scultped figures a man and a woman wrapped in a figure 8. I appreciate you wonderful comments. Always
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great rhyme and flow you use to draw this passionate plea. a very nice read.
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thank you ...picture prompts are fun and keep my pen from drying out, when I can't think of anyting to scribe about
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Thank you for your lovely entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Lovely poem...Lulu
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lulu
thank you
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Beautiful poem <3
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humm..so true and so much impressive sketch you made here with wonderful words of the poetry..well done my friend...
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thank you so much for your insightful comment. It is grately appreciated.
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Very different
I love all sorts of poems but those that rhyme appeal to me because I really believe that it is not as simple as some people think it is. We can all rhyme but we can't all do it well. I like this story and the way it flows and ends.
TC
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Thank you
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This is hot.
I'm going to have to take my shirt of when reading this one. JK LOL This one is very expressive. I can feel the love burning in your soul. This is so great. I wish I could write about passion as brilliantly as you.
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thank you
I blame it on the picture that prompted this piece. I appreciate your comments, thank you
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Yes indeed, love making is an art, a performing art that is. Lovely verse here dear, I enjoyed it.
mj.
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Thank you kind Sir Your thoughtfulness is always welcome here.
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beautifully soft and sensual... like an enveloping hug or a tender kiss...good luck in your contest
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Thank you so very much, your comments are warm and greatly appreciated.
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Oh wow, this is a wonderful creation of words! The flow of this was smooth and made for great reading. Good luck in the contest!
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thank you so very much for stopping by again. Your thoughtfulness is always welcome here.
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Very well penned heat, without the porn so many think is neccessary.
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thank you so much for stopping by your comments are always welcome here
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A beautiful poem, with wonderful imagery and flow. Has a very loving sensual feel to it.
Good luck
~sugar~
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woo hoo thank you so very much for stopping by to read and comment. You thoughtfulness is always welcome here.
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Passionate
Yeah, light my fire, baby...excellent take on the prompt, very sensual.
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thank you, so very very much. I know I was a pain in the assanse on this and i so appreciate you ...
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Fire
Oh yes he fire is burning . the flesh alive and wanting . And into the night lovers drift alone in the tenderness.
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Thank you my friend, as always your comments are most welcome. Thank you for taking the time to visit with this piece.
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GEEEEEEZZZ!!
OH SO SO HOTT!! yeah, it is an art huh?
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Hi Tall dark and handsome, thanks for stopping by so early this morning, glad to see your smiling face, oh yes, thanks for the compliment
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Beautiful poem. Passion. Good luck in the contest
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than you so very much my dear
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