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Smooth Operator ( Gold )

Smoothly undo what is undone,

take me,.... your Woman,

For you are my Man..

 

Undress me with your eyes,

seduce and enjoy.

 

There's no need to hurry,

for we have all night long.

 

Lust for my curves,

sensual-led with oils.

 

Long legs in stockings,

high kicked heels,

black silver negligee

satin lace trim..

 

Move  to the music,

rhythmic we flow

 

Tame me, my Tiger,

caress with a roar.

 

Lay upon silks, quilted

embracing our love.

 


 


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20 to 150 words Sensual Contest
My prompt is ..
http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=d5NVLtmRZJw
TCL Red Light Special

By { Reptile Lady }

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  • carole21
    November 25, 2008
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    lovely sensual write for the prompt . . congrats on the gold !!


  • Alyzeh
    November 18, 2008

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    Oh a lovely sensual write here.. or wait.. I should use the word, HOT. cause that's what it is.

    An excellent take on the prompt! Love how you create such wonderful pieces Julie. All of them are Gold.


  • Alyzeh
    November 18, 2008
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    Oh a lovely sensual write here.. or wait.. I should use the word, HOT. cause that's what it is.

    An excellent take on the prompt! Love how you create such wonderful pieces Julie. All of them are Gold.


  • MysticalRayne
    November 17, 2008

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    Hot - Hot- Hot this is great wonderful job with this prompt - best of luck in the contest


  • daviscth silver member
    November 16, 2008

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    Oh wow sis!!! I just fell in love with this!!! The imagery and wording are just wonderfully done. Thanks so much for sharing this with me! It's awesome.


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    November 13, 2008

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    this is incredible!! Truly sensual and so very beautiful!! I love how you expressed this!! You did such a magnificent job!!! This is so lovely!! You have such talent sis!! I admire the way that you write!!! Excellent details and descriptions!! This is so very very well portrayed!!! You are a truly brilliant writer!! I love ur imagery in this write!!!


  • onesugar gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    This felt like a beautiful moment shared between lovers...it has a wonderful feel to it.
    Good luck hon with this.
    ~sugar~
    I don't know what's up with me unless it's covered in snow, I can't write. DAMN!


  • KayJay
    November 13, 2008

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    A wonderfully sensual and erotic write... filled with more than lust - it flows with love and caring. Beautifully done.
    Ken
    (Line 11 - "heel")


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    Ooh... er, missus... lol!

    Wonderfully soft, tender, warm & sensual write that made for a compelling read with your TM visualisation & flowing narrative...
    Felt it, lived it, loved it...
    Well done!!!


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 13, 2008

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    you took this one, well my friend and i do mean well , great take on the prompt, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


    • Reptile Lady gold member
      November 17, 2008
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      Thank you very much
      What an awesome song, loved the music and watched two of the videos , this one and the more raunchy one
      Great prompt to work with
      and for hosting and the Gold x


  • maralisa silver member
    November 13, 2008

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    a great sensualy alluring poem julie with some great romatic imagery good luck int he contest my friend take care marina

  • Bob Fox
    November 13, 2008

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    Julie

    Those long legs in stockings. Oh what a visual.How I enjoyedremoving them gor I knew a treasure awaited me. One very sensual write yet with class.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    Wow, a very warm and sensually penned piece hunni, such a romantic air to this. All the best in the contest sis


  • Maxboy gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    I think you are the smooth operator here with this very sensual red light special. You have really done well with this.

    Wonderful....Best of luck in the contest


  • chilali
    November 13, 2008

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    Oh my! This was HOT! Incredibly well written with great imagery! Okay, so now we know who is winning this contest for sure! Well done. I loved this!

  • chilali
    November 13, 2008
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    Yay! Let me know when you've written it

  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 13, 2008
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    you prompt is

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d5NVLtmRZJw

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