A smile that wasn't really a smile...
But it seemed to be,
And that was all we needed to keep going.
Nowadays the smiles are real.
And big, and gummy, and full of fun.
And this is where those smiles started.
A contest entry
- Photo Prompt Done Your Way by OldBear34.
900 points, ended November 22, 2008, 6 entries
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what I like about this poem is that you didn't say much, yet you said a lot
I read this poem over and over again and each time I got something more from it... it is really a thought provoking piece in so few words...incredible!
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Good Show!
A minimallist write that is right on point!
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