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First frost

Natures way of an ending.
For to have an ending one must have
a beginning.

Spring brings new life
babies, flowers, love in the air.
Winter brings an ending of life only to
begin again.

Thus life comes full circle.

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  • Malabu
    December 2, 2008
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    so many way one can think aout spring and you have touched upon them


  • AJ Morelli gold member
    November 30, 2008
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    a lovely entry in the contest, thank you so much for entering

    "nature's" in line 1

    al


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 17, 2008
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    powerful last line to wrap up the entire piece. lovely write!


  • afroqban
    November 16, 2008

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    i had this same idea myself..thats how winter feels to me as well. nice to see im not the only one. well done, i love this write


  • penman gold member
    November 14, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well done. Best of luck in the contest.

  • SoulWhispher
    November 13, 2008

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    Life does indeed come full circle, new life to winters ending, most wonderfull poem, so full of hidden emotions, great job, blessings John


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 13, 2008
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    Life certainly does come full circle. A lovely nature poem .
    All the best with this
    Gaylene


    • trekkergirl
      November 13, 2008
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      Thanks for the comment on my poem. It was the only thing that would come to me. Oh well...

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