I’m thankful
for the frosty carpet
covering our yard.
I think I can avoid the cost
of purchasing white paint
for Christmas.
I’m hoping now that it will snow
so we won’t have to spray
our trees with plastic foam.
A contest entry
- first frost by AJ Morelli.
2700 points, ended December 7, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What do you want for Xmas? by Mila7.
1738 points, ended January 4, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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lol
love it
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lol... this is a very cute piece
i think you mean "avoid" in line 4 instead of "avoids"
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"frosty carpet" - beautiful and a cute humorous last stanza!
very cute
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lol, i like the end of this. the entire poem had nice energy
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yeah, that would be a blessing, alright. lol.
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lol..i agree, i wrote on once that spoke of covering junk against the back gate...it covers up a lot of ugly. lol
love quirky, humor here
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