Teasing, tasting and touching,
All for the thrill of the game,
Feeling your warm tongue.
Unfolding your wet flower,
Slowly sinking deep into it,
Making your legs shake.
I will never regret the choice,
To turn down the pretty boys.
Author notes
Prompt: photo
Limit: 20-50 words, 41 used
A contest entry
- Pop my Quickie Cherry by Disturbed Prodigy.
700 points, ended November 17, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh my! Lol very sexy hun xx
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Oh wow, now this is fantastic, every word written is perfect.
Very well written piece and the pic you have there is excellent
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Ahhh the hidden side of you comes out
Well done... you brought life to this image as well as sensuality... A wonderful write. Well done and best of luck...
Ken
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i like what you did here, you made the picture come to life, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Thank you ^_^
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What a tender, sensual and lovely poem you have penned.
Wonderful....Best wishes in the contest
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Hahah! See? I knew it! You always do well with THESE writes! Lol. Well done! Loved how you wrote this. This is definitely a winner!
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I aint done, shoo. Let me work alone
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Omg! There's more! Ayayay! hahaha. Okay, okay! Hmph! I shall not bother
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Its done
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Nice work with this hot picture!
Good luck to you with this one here.
Keep it up!
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shoo! I ain't done!
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LOL! Oh I thought that you were!
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No, I still can't make out how to make it flow
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Oh nice prompt! I know you are going to this justice Meroza. Let me know when it is done!
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this is your prompt
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wow, that one is HOT!
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