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Lick em balls

Lick my balls
They smell like Ajax
and taste like cotton
and they're more sensitive
than the head

of my penis
of my penis
of my
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poetry:  it's all the same.

A contest entry

Don't you hate reading other people's poetry?

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Comments


  • KayJay
    November 13, 2008

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    Well, it certainly brought a smile out... I found it a creative take on the prompt. Well done and best of luck.
    Ken


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 13, 2008
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    interesting, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • chilali
    November 13, 2008

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    Okay! Hahaha. This was certainly interesting. lol. Interesting take on the quote. Good luck in the contest.

  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 13, 2008

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    your prompt is

    "They may forget what you said, but they will never forget how you made them feel."

    Carl W. Buechner