Bringing a whole new meaning in this sex driven land
Master slave trader always taking virgin hands
Buying and trading in the market, one he couldn't sell
Had his way and all was well.
Let him touch her in ways she never dreamed
Never able to see his evil schemes
Author notes
OKai, i think i failed miserably at this ^_^;
And with the word limit change it kinda died even worse ^_^;
http://www.bergoiata.org/fe/heroic-fantasy/Erotic%20Fantasy%20-%20Boris%20Vallejo%20-%20%20Vampire%20Power.jpg
A contest entry
- Pop my Quickie Cherry by Disturbed Prodigy.
700 points, ended November 17, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A well told tale... My only criticism would be the title set my expectations for a different kind of write... the rhyme was good, the story bold... I'd say you did well. Best of luck...
Ken
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this is very well done, i wouldn't say you failed my friend, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Very, very interesting. I cannot say if your take on the picture was good because I am at work and I don't want to be caught looking at erotic pictures! It's not something I do! Hahaha. But yes. It was very well writte. Best to you in the contest
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