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Ecstasy Lies In Words

 

 

She's been awake since 6 am.
Paper work and coffee spills till 7 pm.

She gets back home
To find velvety soft crimson petals
leading to the hot tub.

There he was standing
with a bottle of red wine in his hands
And her silk robe in the other.

"Someone looks in need of a massage this evening."

She slipped into the robe
before going into the luke-warm water.

He gently massaged her neck,
while whispering sweet and playful words
into her ear.

Words that made every inch of her body,
from head to toe
tingle and tremble.

He wished to move further,
As soon as his hands started to find their way below her waist,
She stopped him..

 

She elevated her neck,

so that her lips could reach his ears.

 

She whispered,

lusting for more...

"No, continue,

tell me, what you wish to do next."

Author notes

Prompt: For women the best aphrodisiacs are words. The G-spot is in the ears. He who looks for it below there is wasting his time.
~Isabel Allende

146 words.

Picture Credit: http://bouncingferrit.deviantart.com/art/Sensual-70289847

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  • Swtpoetryman
    March 1

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    A SWEET & SENSUAL PIECE INDEED - FROM A SWEET & SENSUAL LADY!

    I have written of washing away the demands, the aches, the pains, the worries, and the darkness of the day in a romantic and erotic way just like this - in some of my softer adult pieces - as nothing is better than getting a little bit wetter with the one who loves you most! Your fellow is a lucky man as it is easy to see from the love in your eyes and your sultry smile that you are a sweet and sensual woman to say the least.
    Love & Peace!
    Earl.


  • Zenda-Lokki
    December 10, 2008

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    Subtly sensual and a great take on the prompt. Another fantastic entry, thank you so much. Oh and congrats on the HM xx


  • SubKitten
    December 10, 2008

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    That was very well written. And the quote that inspired it is very fitting. Good luck in the contest!


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    December 10, 2008

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    *growl* so playful and naughty

    great write!


  • Rhythm Child
    November 28, 2008
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    and god i love them kinda pics ! lol


  • Rhythm Child
    November 28, 2008

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    i loved the quote, i think its so true (dunno if i sound like slightly gay for saying that) lol but its right in my opinion anywaz
    not that anything works wif my gf but hey ! lol

    a really well written poem
    sensual yet subtle
    lovely


  • JinSays gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    I see you've met Fishie
    What a mess he is!
    LOL.
    I think you've done it love, maybe I wasn't looking at it well enough.
    The G-spot. . .lol that author's note, and she's right.
    Words can melt you, make you do all sorts of crazy things you'd never think you could do.
    BEAUTIFUL my sweet girl, beautiful
    Love always,
    jin


  • luna-midnight gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    awwwww..hehe. this is nice.
    i really like it, its light and kinda playful and what a prompt. good luck and take care
    Stephanie ♥


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    Beautifully written hun, I loved the playfullness of this one, romantic at the same time. Best to you in the contest

  • silverfish
    November 14, 2008

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    bottle that and sell it; you won't have to worry about any recession--in economy or erogeny. -potion#9fish


  • Alyzeh
    November 13, 2008

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    Ylova. This is so very good. I loved the imagery, it's so true how you are getting better and better with every write. I mean, I don't even know which one I like the best out of all your pieces. Absolutely brilliant! I swear, excellent take on the prompt, I loved the prompt too. This was a poem with a amazing flow to it. Bravo! =)


  • LionessK silver member
    November 13, 2008

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    I like that quote, how true that can be (sometimes).
    You did very well with this. Kind of write that has one daydreaming for the rest of the night.


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    SO VERY PASSIONATE!!!!!

    I always wanted this kind of passion with my ex but she wanted different things, well one day with faith someone will bring this kind of love and passion into my life,


  • KayJay
    November 13, 2008

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    Sensual, playful, and filled with loving imagery. You know the secret of words Well done and best of luck.
    Ken


  • 2lullabyhaven
    November 13, 2008

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    Wow, right on, it takes a woman to know what a woman wants hahaha you've got our number for sure good luck in the contest lol


  • HaileeDear
    November 13, 2008

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    oh goodness me... your imagery is so fantastic, and thats my favorite thing. i went in and read the prompt and holy crap..you nailed it. it flows together so well ..

    <3


  • MD Masroor
    November 13, 2008

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    whoa.. your imagery, your creativity, the strength in your words, just spectacular. your take on the prompt was not only perfect, u took it to the next level and made the imagination of your readers flow wild. yup, the image you created was picture perfect.. great piece of art! good luck in the contest!


  • Dalaney gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    you have taken this prompt to a level all women will understand, and hopefully, a few men You are an exceedingly mature writer for your young age, and I
    am so very honored to read your work - I can only
    imagine what you will be writing like in ten years!
    Love, Lane

  • Bob Fox
    November 13, 2008

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    Shivers

    And so let it be. Desires filled and the liquid warmth of water and lust. a combination that makes a moment special and lasting.


  • Hikari Lady
    November 13, 2008

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    I have read this story in some kind of a site and was so impressed by the gentelness of this guy, lol, really envied this woman. You painted it beautifully, I specially liked your ending and how it sent thoughts into my head.
    Great write and best of luck!

    ~Noor


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    Prompt: For women the best aphrodisiacs are words. The G-spot is in the ears. He who looks for it below there is wasting his time.
    ~Isabel Allende

    Uh huh, how very true, and a most sensual write indeed dear.

    All the best,
    mj.


  • Ken-Maverick
    November 13, 2008

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    Nice one dude,
    I like the imagery in this piece,
    and it kinda brought back a few memories of mine
    Keep up the good work
    and the best of luck in the contest

    Ken


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    Oh hun
    You sure painted the story of her return
    and what a wonderful welcome home
    Perfect end.. or better said start to the evening
    I loved it.
    Good luck in the contest and best wishes always
    Much love Julie x


  • thejollytinker
    November 13, 2008

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    That's the way love is supposed to work!!!!!  Gotta go patch the roof- my head went through... 


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 13, 2008

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    Wonderful work with this prompt
    and I love the image that you found
    for it. Good luck to you here!




    Jeremy0826


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 13, 2008

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    lol, i liked the ending of this i mean it was good, you did a good job on this, keep it flowing good luck in the contest


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 13, 2008
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    This is your prompt

    For women the best aphrodisiacs are words. The G-spot is in the ears. He who looks for it below there is wasting his time.
    ~Isabel Allende

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