Oh feathered breast so warm, so dear,
For whom does your heart sing?
That soft melody, so tender, clear,
And shining does it ring!
Hear me now, a soft repeat,
Oh tender blossom of the air!
Sing me a tune so saintly sweet,
Delicate as prayer!
Alas your notes, that song alone,
Sustain my beating need!
And with you now my heart has flown
For sake of being free!
Oh quiet ballad! Lullaby!
So sagely, sacred, rare!
Your music drifts from sky to sky,
And none other may compare!
Oh feathered breast, oh beating heart,
Bless’ed be thy love!
And never shall I let thee part,
My darling turtle dove!
Author notes
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"Color me Shutter-Tone Deaf"
Option 5: Love.
A contest entry
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Ode to love
Comments
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aww a very cute and loving poem the rhyme and gentle flow is wonderful its pleasent to read and made me happy
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THis is a great poem you wrote filled with such love for the one you love. Best of luck in the contest!!!


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I fell in love with the rhyme and gentle flow of this. thank you so much for the entry. It isn't as deep as some, but has a softness about it that is pleasing and soothing. Thank you
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i like this. love is interesting thing. what it can make ppl do



