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Remain Unseen

I adore you
but you can't know
because I know
that you will run!

I love you
but you'll never know
because you dont
know how to love back.

You are my beloved
but I am alone.
I am here
without you.

My love for you
will last forever
but to save you...
it will remain unseen

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  • Ali
    November 18, 2008
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    Hey Shantell, excellent write


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 17, 2008

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    It is sad when we find we can not express what is within us, especially when it comes to love.

    Powerfully penned with raw emotions

    ♥
    Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda