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Love's Calling

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The early dawn of love's calling
gives rise to twilight desires,
relinquished of subdued captivity
fluttering so as if faeries dance
in one's soul.
Wrapped in silk and lace
sparkling glow of warmth evident,
shines in jester for any to behold.
In quest bold
flight to love's voice true.

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Credit artist: http://sokolova-katarina.deviantart.com/art/Elodies-Secret-Stories-92539252

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  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    December 12, 2008

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    excellent~

    Beautiful
    Again wonderful imagery
    Great going on the prompt
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


    • Rclane gold member
      December 12, 2008
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      Thank you again for the time invested in reading and commenting on an old man's ramblings....


  • going nowhere
    November 15, 2008

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    how beautifully written... love's call. can't get better than that when you hear the voice of one who is true.


    • Rclane gold member
      November 16, 2008
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      thank you for your time in reading and commenting


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    A bold quest indeed. Beautifully written and a lovely take on the picture.


    • Rclane gold member
      November 14, 2008
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      Thank you for the read and comment also the chance to muse.....


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    November 13, 2008
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    Great take on the pic..I got nothing..wonderfully written my friend. Best of luck!


    • Rclane gold member
      November 13, 2008
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      Thank you. It was late and this is where it took me....

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