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My Anguish

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Oh the agony in which I dwell,
lost in a vacuum of identity,
struggling in this wilderness of misconception,
enduring the bias to my clan
by those dreadful tales
about rogue grizzlies and polar rage.

And then I must endure
having to live in the shadow
of a firefighting relative named Smokey.

Where is my redemption of persona
amid the images crafted for my brethren?
How I wish once they would grant us
the same adorable lore as the fabled Pooh.

Perhaps I’ll ponder a plan to weave
some bear magic unto mankind’s heart,
visiting a house while the owners are gone
to leave a mark that I dropped by,
then maybe they will know how we feel
about the Goldilocks episode.

Granting us some attention
without a season in need of a rifle
or one that ends up with us  in some zoo,
as long as it doesn’t involve
using my hide as a rug.

How precious it would be
if human minds could be open
to the simple possibility
we would enjoy more out of life
than some fish or honey.

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  • Mirthryl
    November 25, 2008

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    Delightful consideration of the many commercial and sensational associations we connect with bears. I particularly enjoyed "leave a mark that I dropped by, ...how we feel about the Goldilocks episode." Very enjoyable

  • carole21
    November 17, 2008

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    a very nice write . . inspirational and cute . . good use of "bear" figures . . best of luck in the contest !!


  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    November 16, 2008

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    This is an awesome poem. I like your thoughts about bears. It makes one think. I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest


  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    I love this I love bears teddy bears and real bears, and we treat these beautiful creatures so badly mostly because we dont understand them,
    another great write from a favourite poet