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I Will Come Back To You

Angels at sunset, drowned in the sea. 

I'm one of them. You killed me.

Ripped out my wings, shredded my heart,

the sky shed tears of pearl white feathers,

it was a work of art, but I promise you... 

I will return for you my love, 

after six days at the bottom of the ocean,

searching for my lost soul in its depths,

 

I will come back to you.

 

You can count on one thing,

if anything at all that I have said

the promise I made to you, that

always, no matter what, 

torn heart, no wings, lost love,

always in my arms you will be.

Protected, guided, your Angel

at sunset who was drowned at the sea. 

 

I will come back to you...

for I will always, always love you...

 

Signed,

~Angel of Dreams~

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I think it is finally finished.
I wrote this while listening to Explosion in the Sky. Their two most awesome songs, "Six Days at the Bottom of the Ocean" and "Your Hand in Mine" inspired me.

~Angel of Dreams

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  • Thewordflow
    October 12, 2009

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    Beautiful! amazing write i must say

    Although im not quite so sure about the page colours :L theyre a bit dazzling :L

    Good luck and thankyou for entering


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    August 2, 2009

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    Very beautifully written and filled with so much
    love. Thanks a lot for taking the time to enter
    this contest. I have never heard of those two songs
    but, will definitely listen to them soon. Take care
    and all the best to you in this contest of ours!




    Jeremy0826


  • Hikari Phoenix
    November 13, 2008

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    It is amazing, so much love a devotion. I can't wait to see what you can do to make it even better. It looks great just like it is, though.

    ~Noor


  • LovesPlayToy
    November 13, 2008
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    this is so amazzzzzinnnngg
    thats all i can really say!


  • Shakes-spear
    November 12, 2008
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    very nice

    even if it's only a start it is great already! The Shaker


  • Hope Angel silver member
    November 12, 2008

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    *Dances around with your poem saying amazing over and over again and you can't argue with me *

    Ok, sorry, I liked this part the best even though I loved the whole thing. "I'm one of them. You killed me".
    I love you

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