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Trans Bonfire


I invented a world, a state of great meditation,
where peace abounds, where love is sweet angelic,
where the delights dance in transcendental echoes
within perfection of a spiritual sublime universe.

The soft intoxication of the senses; floating free,
enhancing purity of the pious sensuous mysteries,
in the destiny eternal to excite body's appeasements,
as a coveted jewel, a diamond in an infinite fantasy.

Auspicious horizons touching the land of salvation,
consume exquisite carnal desires of alluring mirage,
in succulent thirst of unknown effervescence, tremors,
within an unforgettable bonfire trance of lotus meditation.










Author notes

~spiritualangel~

2. Trance state

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  • Dark Otter
    November 25, 2008

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    Well written!

    A good poem that shows your insight and your poetic skill. Your words are rich and your thoughts transcending.


  • chilali
    November 12, 2008
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    Great take on the prompt I loved this. Well done!