These tears don't fall
They crash around me
Falling quickly
Shattering me
All of me
I deny that Im crying
Theres things you dont see
Breaking slowly
killing me
Just dying
And when you ask
Is the pain past
Does the future come last
Can i forget the past
and put my heart in a cast
No these arent tears tearing me apart
Its not fear, or the lessons i was taught
I dont know where to even start
I just cant seem to not get caught
Its just raining in my heart
Author notes
BAD!!! WOW
A contest entry
- Raining In My Heart by Sandygram.
900 points, ended November 21, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think yall?
Comments
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this is good, i liked it, you can feel the sadness through the whole thing, but it's very powerful and well written, i like that the end has some hope, best of luck in the contest
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Wonderful poem. I could feel the sadness in your words. Lovely imagery to touch the reader's heart. Thank you for entering and best of luck in my contest. Take care, Sandy
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well written
heart open exposed your pain flows with such sadness
Blessings
Rend
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Great job baby!
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