People like to stare,
people like to gape.
Getting these girls
into tip top shape.
Soft fluffy pillows
to fondle and squeeze.
Always erect when
the robbers shout, "Freeze!"
Precious moments seized,
no time to dwaddle.
Started a career,
I'm a supermodel!
In a list
A contest entry
- Giggle Time... by Silent Cougar.
700 points, ended November 26, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
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A FUN POEM.
EULA -
100th Hood-Wink!
There are many errors in this poem - you have "Jumstart" instead of "Jumpstart" in the title, "Aways" instead of "Always" in the second stanza, and "dwaddled" instead of "dawdled" in the third ... other than that this gave me a laugh
well done on winning gold!
Keep writing
Polly
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so funny thinking that they freeze at robbers,,,i thought the robbers would freeze at being confronted by them (con-fronted) 'oh I'm finding this one funnier than I thought now',,,, maybe a new carreer in law enforcement
who would run from them.. lol had too,,, very funny and just the job, well done.
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At least she stays well hydrated and has a vast assortment of spices and such. Hilarious write. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing.
There's a few typos you may have overlooked. One is in the title (Jumstart) and the other is in the second stanza (Aways).
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Oh funny write! Good job Mia!
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Ok, I wish you success in your new career, not sure what your job will be. have fun if its what I think. lol. Thank you for the smiles.
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