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Warm bosom

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I lie curled up
in my couch,
chill has no mercy
biting with its teeth

I am cold shouldered
every turn led me into dark alley
I searched all night
for streak of light,
through thick clouds;

my shadow has become a burden
with thoughts sitting heavy as lead
I groan for what I carried;

drenched in despair
I looked for
spotless innocent smile;


that unfurl my wings
floating me in air,
conflicts disappearing
merging into white ray,
with a falling rain drop.

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  • Barely Breathing gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    This is such a beautiful write my friend, it was such a pleasure to read this and I wish you all the best in the contest.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 12, 2008

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    Beautiful work here and thanks so much
    for taking the time to write for this contest.
    I really appreciate it and wish you the best of
    luck with your entry!




    Jeremy0826