I thought about you this last year
And how our love, it was so dear
The dreams we shared, along the way
With nothing to do, and not a word to say
Remember how you said, you loved me so
Without a care, and nowhere to go
I remember your touch, inside of my mind
And when I was hurt, you stayed so kind
I miss your smile, and your beautiful face
I miss my princess, my angel of grace
I wonder if you miss, the love that I had
Remembering the good, and forgetting the bad
So many times, I proved I was wrong
But we both made it through, and proved we were strong
I wonder if you think, at all about me
I think about you, and where you could be
Don't ever forget, the love that was true
I won't ever forget, because I love you
Author notes
Michael H. 1
A contest entry
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900 points, ended November 21, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Such a beautiful heart felt poem and i love every word of it. It made me smile to myself and then laugh about something i had forgotten...thanks for entering GL.
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Such a sweet and heart felt
exposure of your love.
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I really like the way you put this all together. its very easy to relate and so honest n pure. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing, ~TC
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i really like the way you wrote this, this very sad, but so powerful, i like the thoughts, and i love way you broke up the stanzas it made for an excellent read, best of luck in the contest
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This is an amazing poem, the way you said everything was absolutely beautiful, I love it! Welcome to the finalists list!
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Such a beautiful poem you have penned.. It says excactly how I am feeling. Wonderful flow and rhyme. Thank you for entering and best of luck in my contest. Take care, Sandy
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Another great poem. Well done.
i love these lines.
"I wonder if you miss, the love that I had
Remembering the good, and forgetting the bad"
beautiful and very heart felt. -
Wow Moving
deep emotions penned! i loved the flow with each stanza, great depth of love here!
Rend
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