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~~ A Special Friendship~Green Trophy (Honorable Mention)

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Thanks for always being there
And trying to understand
Thanks for always being there
And lending a helping hand

Thanks for letting me lean on you
When I can't stand alone
The value of your friendship
Is never on a loan

Thanks for always being there
On days when I am ill and weak
Thanks for always being there
When I am at my peak

Thanks for always being there
Even when I have done wrong
Thanks for always being there
Until once again I grow strong

Thanks for always being there
To help me make it through
But most of all a special thanks
For always being you

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    What a wonderful tribute to a beautiful man. Bob is so special, and you've penned his character perfectly. We're all so lucky to have him in our lives. Fantastic job on this piece!


  • melphleg gold member
    November 20, 2008

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    Wow. If I could give gold just for encouraging me with words, I would. This says some beautiful things. You express such warm gratitude.


  • Desire gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    Precious~

    Oh My Word~ this is a Beauty Sis and Love the emotions You have shared
    Gorgeous background also to add~
    This must be some special person~ *gift*
    You both are Blessed and Blessings~
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 17, 2008

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    that is a friend my friend, you did a great job on this poem, i mean that, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • HeWillAlwaysBeAFool
    November 16, 2008
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    Aaaaw! This is so sweet!
    ~Sarah


  • daviscth silver member
    November 16, 2008
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    This is such a loving tribute to your special someone. Thank you for sharing it with me Susan.


  • Maureen silver member
    November 16, 2008

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    Special poem for a special friend!

    Friends are so important in our lives. I'm thankful you have many!

    I miss you, Sis. I'm lighting a candle and saying a prayer for you tonight.

    Love you!
    Maureen


  • Ethereal One gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    so sweet

    You express your appreciation of your friend, so well in your poem. He must be a very special person.

    Good luck in this contest!

    Jeannette


  • haikumonk gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    Wonderful tribute to a very special friend. If I were him... I would be beaming after reading this! Feel better soon..........many blessings to you, always.


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    What a sweet and dear tribute to a friend. As always your words flow with sweetness and beauty.
    Take care and God Bless

    Linda


  • troyias
    November 13, 2008

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    BEAUTIFUL

    great tribute to a strong pillar in your life. Hope you are doing better, my prayers are with you

    *Go with God* sweet one

    Valeerie


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    November 13, 2008
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    Beatifully expressed
    words of true meaning...

    Take care, Susan.

    M-C


  • Corvidae
    November 13, 2008
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    Excellent piece, Susan!


  • Melodies
    November 12, 2008

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    Awww... What a dear poem for a special person. That sort of appreciation is so beautiful and you wrote it exactly that way.


  • Quiet places
    November 12, 2008
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    Excellent

    A wonderful tribute my dear friend. Very inspirational. Don


  • Rclane gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    Very nicely done. Seems funny sometimes where true friendship is found at least to me anyway....just thinking outloud. See a good write you made me think. Best to you
    Rick


  • klassy lassy
    November 12, 2008

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    Friendship is one of the true blessings in our daily lives. It's amazing the support we receive from those who love us from a distance, some we never meet, but know if we did, we would recognize them "from the heart out."

    Your thanks for a tender soul who touches your life is heart felt. The poem says it all! ~Karen


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    I too agree, he is a gentle caring soul, and needs to be recognized for his caring ways, thank you for sharing as always
    Linda


  • Amera gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    This is really beautiful and you wrote it for a dear man and that makes me happy. He's a fantastic guy and a true friend. Thank you for writing this.

    Love,
    Amera♥

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